

托福写作中,学生在行文组织时最常见的错误有哪些呢?主谓一致、代词一致、多谓语……今天我们将介绍集中常见的以及容易忽略的语法错误,希望同学们在平时的行文中要特别注意这些问题。
学生在行文组织中最常见的错误,包括主谓一致问题、代词一致问题、多谓语、谓语错用、主从复合句成分缺失和简单层叠无连词等。
主谓一致问题
Incorrect | Correct |
More than one reason are expressed in the reading passage. | More than one reason is expressed in the reading passage. |
One idea is that the size of the brain indicate a person’s intelligence. | One idea is that the size of the brain indicates a person’s intelligence. |
代词一致问题
Incorrect | Correct |
The best way to prevent a car accident is to prevent them from happening. | The best way to prevent a car accident is to prevent it from happening. |
Mary is a salesperson which does a good job. | Mary is a salesperson who does a good job. |
多谓语
Incorrect | Correct |
Martha Graham she made her debut in 1920 with the Denishawn School | Martha Graham made her debut in 1920 with the Denishawn School. |
Although Christopher Columbus he failed in his original goal, the discovery he did make were more important than the route to Asia he expected to find. | Although Christopher Columbus failed in his original goal, the discovery he did make were more important than the route to Asia he expected to find. |
谓语错用
Incorrect |
Correct |
These new drugs as wonder drugs saving many people who are very sick. | These new drugs as wonder drugs save many people who are very sick. |
主从复合句成分缺失
Incorrect | Correct | |
As a result, reduction in the number of death. | As a result, reduction in the number of death has been |
简单句层叠无连词
Incorrect | Correct |
Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, this water cannot be used for other purposes. | Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, and this water cannot be used for other purposes. |
以上我们介绍了集中常见的以及容易忽略的语法错误,在平时的行文中要特别注意这些问题。除此之外我们之前还提到,除了精良的语法基础以外,托福写作还要求学生有灵活的句型转换能力。
我们再给大家介绍几种高分的句型结构,包括:强调句,倒装句,比较结构,非谓语动词结构。在上述这些结构里面,和我们讲的语法错误相关的是关于非谓语动词的结构,学生常在一句话中出现多谓语,那修改多谓语最直接的方式就是就是把多余的谓语变成非谓语结构,常见的非谓语结构有:现在分词形式,过去分词形式,以及不定式结构,具体的讲解请听下回分解。
教育背景: 浙江工商大学英语专业八级,英国利兹大学同声传译。
教授科目: 雅思/托福阅读 托福听力。
授课风格: 以最实用的备考技巧,助你高效达到理想的成绩。
学员评价: 亲切热情、有强大的感染力。