雅思写作高分范文：网购

网购的便利让人们越来越倾向这种购物方式，但其实也有隐患，下面，小编为大家带来一篇有关online shopping 的文章，希望能为广大烤鸭们提供帮助。

首先，关于文章结构：

plan your essay with a 4-paragraph structure:

1. Introduction: topic + response (2 sentences are enough)

Introduce the topic of 'online shopping becoming more popular'. Then write that it will have a significant impact on the environment and on jobs.

2. Paragraph about the environment

Write about simple ideas e.g. people will drive less, so there will be less pollution, less destruction from the building of new roads, but perhaps more packaging.

3. Paragraph about jobs

Simple ideas e.g. many shop workers will lose their jobs, unemployment may rise, but there will be more skilled jobs in IT (computer programmers, web designers).

4. Conclusion: repeat your response

Overall opinion: online shopping may have a negative effect on employment, but it might be a good thing for the environment.

范文： online shopping

During the last decade, the online shopping has increased dramatically which has advantages and disadvantages that affect not only the environment, but also the economic statues and numbers of employed people especially in the developed countries.

On the other hand, some people demolish the previous arguments and say that online shopping has lots of drawbacks;

Firstly, it helps to produce a consumer society and waste products of that society will lead to environmental pollutions.

Secondly, numbers of unemployed people have increased as many workers lost their jobs. For example, in my country, Egypt, one of the biggest super markets introduced the online shopping service which reflected positively on the profits of the company, but a large number of workers lost their jobs.

Finally, by using this kind of shopping, some companies my cheat the clients through alteration the goods that the costumer choose online.

To sum up, online shopping has positive impacts on both the environment and the economical status of the country, but it may increase the numbers of unemployed people. So, if governments want to apply this kind of shopping they should find suitable alternative jobs for the fired people.

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