吐血整理：托福写作中被秒杀的开头！

每一位参加托福写作考试的同学都希望有一个“凤头”，因而绞尽脑汁去“创作”，结果知道成绩，却是感到满满的挫败感！小编在此带来吐血整理：托福写作中被秒杀的开头，想要托福高分，大家可要仔细绕开！

托福写作中被秒杀的开头1：过分简单没有重点(吐血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

托福写作中被秒杀的开头2：用词不当 表达不准 (吐血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

托福写作中被秒杀的开头3：意思重复原地踏步(吐血指数：☆☆☆)

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典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

托福写作中被秒杀的开头4：中国俗语胡乱翻译(吐血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

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Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

以上就是托福写作禁忌，绝对不可出现的托福写作开头的介绍。这些错误大家要十分注意，经常会出现在我们的托福写作中，希望同学们谨慎绕开哦！

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