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雅思作文,结尾段如何写?

2014-10-28

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导语:

雅思作文一般结尾段需要写两到三句话。雅思作文结尾段应包括一个表示总结的signal word。例如,In conclusion, In summary, Overall,to be concluded,to summarise, to sum up等等。

雅思作文雅思作文如何写?雅思写作

雅思作文一般结尾段需要写两到三句话。雅思作文结尾段应包括一个表示总结的signal word。例如,In conclusion, In summary, Overall,to be concluded,to summarise, to sum up等等。这一系列词虽然已经泛滥,但其实也没法推陈出新,而且创新也不会加分。

>>>下列总结了一些表示总结的表达:

To summarise / to sum up
  In conclusion / to be concluded
  On balance /overall / on the whole
  To return to my original idea
  This is a complex issue with no clear answers…..
  If we look at both sides of the argument,…..

雅思作文结尾段的第一句话要重审自己的观点;对于观点类文章,可直接转述自己的thesis statement;对于论述类文章,如果主体段采取的是四段论,这就是你要表达观点的地方;对于报告类文章,一般无需表达自己观点,所以不用重审观点。

雅思作文结尾段的第二句话要做总结,把每个主体段的主要内容做简要概括,不要包含任何具体例子或解释。

>>>Sample conclusion:

In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it is good or bad?

Conclusion 1.

In my opinion it is unjust that a sports star such as David Beckham earns far more money than a doctor whose work is invaluable in saving peoples’ lives. The principle reason for saying this is that the doctor clearly makes a much more valuable contribution to society than someone who is involved in the entertainment industry.

Conclusion 2.

I personally believe that in the ideal world someone’s income would relate to their value to society. However, in the modern world, it is almost unavoidable that the famous will have the highest incomes because of their media exposure.

对比以上两个雅思作文的结尾,哪一个更好呢?显然是第二个,首先第一个结尾出现了具体的例子和细节,其次第一个结尾并没有完全回答题目的两个问题,只概括了自己的观点,这是不是一个好的趋势,而并没有回答发生这种情况的原因。

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