【教师解读】11月22日雅思写作考题与范文

11月22日雅思写作考题解析与范文

　　The tables below show how the number of international students from three resource countries changed in the USA and Canada.
（具体数据欠缺，仅供参考）
       

The number of students

题目分析：
　　表格，动态图，重点写每个国家去加拿大和美国的留学生在每个学期之间数量的变化，以及两个表格之间的对比。

　　范文：
　　The tables presents the fluctuation of the number of international students from three resource countries in America and Canada respectively.
（具体数据缺失，故只能提供开头段）

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　　Task 2
　　Online  shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or  negative development
　　题目类型：讨论类

　　提纲：
        

　　The spread of computer and Internet has changed nearly every aspect of human being’s life, one of which is the public’s shopping mode. Today, online shopping gains the popularity among every walk of life, not only the young consumers as experts once expected. Many people, according, worry that it may soon substitute the conventional shopping in stores. From my perspective, online shopping is an inevitable trend that the modern technology brings to us. Thus, what we should do is nothing but to embrace it. (非限定性定语从句，主语从句，宾语从句）

Online shopping conduces to relieving the unemployment problem. It offers the young entrepreneurs a chance to start their own business without considering the rent of the store. The flourish of some related industries, to some extent, is also associated with the boom of online shopping, to name a few, the transportation and the logistics. One needs look no further than the example of “November 11th” in China. For the Chinese netizens, November 11th is no longer just a date, but a celebration event for online shopping, for nearly all the e-commerce websites would offer 50% discount on that day. This year, the November 11th brought huge profits not only to the online store owners, but also stimulated the prosperity of logistics. Thus, online shopping is a sound platform to absorb the young laborers. (插入语，动名词）

The consumers are also the beneficiaries of online shopping, considering that it enriches people’s daily lives. Now, it is not as difficult as before for the young parents in China to purchase the milk powder from the foreign websites for their newborn baby. It also seems not impossible for the Chinese girls to dress themselves up with the elegant skirts made in Korea or Japan. In a word, online shopping offers the consumers a wider range of options. (原因状语从句， 双重否定）

The vulnerable nature of the Internet, on the other hand, also warns the public the safety of online shopping. The rampant internet fraud poses a potential hazard to the internet user’s safety of their bank accounts. Another fact that is worth mentioning is that the conventional stores’ profits are severely affected due to the competition from the invisible stores on the websites. Many of the former even face the bankruptcy owing to the declining number of consumers. (同位语从句，定语从句）

In brief, online shopping is the outcome of modern technology. Therefore, it is highly advisable for the public to make full use of the advantages it may bring to us, while combat the Internet crimes to guarantee the consumer’s safety. Only in this way can the technology serves human being’s life as far as possible. (倒装句）

相关题目辨析：
　　People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face to face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole?（2013.7.18）

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