新通天津总结学生在雅思作文写作中容易忽视的点和常见的错误

本篇文章主要通过学生在写作中的错误实例， 论述一下基础段学生在雅思作文写作中容易忽视的点和常见的错误供大家参考。大致分为三大点：句子成分不完整（sentence structure fragment），中国式思维以及介词的错用。

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下面我们来看具体同学们的句子：

1. Sentence structure Fragment 句子成分不完整

a. Government should investment more funds into infrastructure. 

Where is Verb? 在a句中，should 为情态动词，不能独立作谓语，后面应加动词原形，而句中的“investment ”为名词，所以造成整句话的动词缺失。

b. Establishing a new restaurant in foreign country will challenges because different countries have different cultures.

b句中，will为助动词，不可单独作谓语，而后面的“challenges” 为名词，造成了整句话的动词，也就是谓语缺失。

c. I tend to agree that young children can be negatively by too much time spending on computer everyday.

c句中，agree后面的宾语从句，出现了can be, 同学在这句话中想用被动语态进行叙述，被动语态的构成是“ be动词+动词的过去分词形式”， 可后面的“negatively”为副词， 同样地，这句话缺少了一个动词。

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2.中式思维是中国学生在雅思作文中最常出现的错误，影响整体作文的阅读性。

a. In a word, people could select their suitable ways of working according to their needs.

a句出现在总结段的最后，学生想通过这句话提出自己的一个建议或者是引荐，可是情态动词中， we use “should” for advice and recommendation，也就是说这句话中，我们用“should”会更精确。

b. Everyone can choose their suitable ways of working.

b句中的错误是中国学生们的常见问题，习惯用everyone这种词，此类词的表达意思都太绝对，例如本句话中，不是每个人都有这个观点或者能力来做后面的这件事。

c. Although various culture people have totally different living habits, they feel satisfied all the time.

c句中，句尾的“all the time”, 用的太“强势”了，这时候，判卷人就会特别怀疑的想着“ are you sure”, 没有任何人可以证明这些人一直都非常满足。

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3.介词的错用(prep)

a. For instance, softerware which no matter what jobs people has been installed on computers allow people to arrange files. (in)

b. Tele-working is time-saving, which means people can avoid waiting for the time-consuming traffic jams. (in)

c. In particular, people always feel relaxed and less stressful when they are working at their own flats. (in)

d. Especially, for women who have babies, it is redundant to arrange working time and take care of their babies at home than working at long-distance offices. (In)

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