2015年5月16日雅思写作预测与解析

这一部分重点准备地图和静态图模版

重点准备：柱状图、线形图、流程图

1. 柱状图（静态图）
对于静态图，大家记住课上静态图模版的三单两双100多个字即可全部应对。

重点：
 

对比句式示例：
Compared with...，… and …（变化比较特殊的项目） shrunk/mounted/fluctuated and were different with others. As for the absolute value of thechanges the one showed the largest number was 变化最大的单项 climbed / dropped by变化幅度最大的数字 whereas 变化最小的单项 had the smallest number and ascended / descended by变化幅度最小的数字. The other ones all displayed the changesbetween them.

2. 线形图（动态图）
重点分析：
（1）单线各自的变化，关键性数据：起止点、极点
（2）线与线间特殊数据：同一起止点、与最大值变化有关的交叉点
（3）互相之间的对比：平行或完全反向这些特殊形式

常见的扣分点：
一是动词的时态：
 

二是词性搭配，动词+副词（shrunk rapidly），形容词+名词(a significantgrowth)

描述连续变化句式示例：
The number of 单线名称started at 全线起点数值 in 全线起点时间 and 第一段变化（动词+副词）later.And the figure 第二段变化（动词+副词） when it reached 第一段终点数值 in第一段终点时间. The trend continued 第二段时间长度 and changed to 第三段变化（形容词+名词）.After 第四段起点时间 第四段变化（形容词+名词）displayed and reached 全线终点数值 by全线终点时间finally.

3.流程图
注意运用以下表示次序和并列的词汇：
次序
At the beginning，Next，Then，Afterthat，Afterwards，Following that，Finally
并列
Alternatively，At the same time，Concurrently，either … or，Otherwise

加工流程图：
每一步要说明三点：处理的原料，使用的机械或发生的地点，加工的步骤。
句式要多变，比如：
Atthe first stage natural rubber andchemical admixture are put into acontainer and stirred until they arewell-distributed.
Thena rotating heater takes theresponsibility of heating the mixedpowder uniformly.


 

这一部分重点准备下面列明的通用论点论据

一级重点包含以下5个领域：提供重点论点论据

1. 学习内容
通用论点论据：
1.
论点：Diversifiedlearning helps to set future career goals.
     多样的学习内容有助于确定将来的职业目标。
论据：Withthe practice in different areas students will be equipped with multipleskills given a chance to be exposed to different areas and prepared ready forentering a real-world.
    由于在不同的领域内的实践，学生被不同的技能所武装，得到机会接触不同的领域并为进入真实的世界做好准备。
2.
论点：Culturalclasses could improve individual cultural qualities
     文化课可以增强个人文化素养
论据：Historyand art are vital in helping students in understanding our culture andproviding a sense of personal and national identify because they are thecommon ground of our current lifestyles.
    历史和艺术在帮助学生们理解我们的文化和提供个人和国家认同感上是非常重要的，因为它们是我们现在的生活方式的共同点。

既往真题：
绘画课应该成为必修课吗？
Some people think painting anddrawings are as important as other subjects so they should be compulsory inhigh school education. Do you agree or disagree?
应该把国际新闻列为中学课程吗？
Somepeople think that secondary school students should learn international news asone of their subjects while others believe that this is a waste of valuableschool time. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
孩子们学习历史必要吗？
Some people think it isimportant for the children to learn history in school. Others think learningsubjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give youropinion.
计算机学习是否应成为基础教育的第四个主要部分？
We have three importantpart of education: reading writing and math. Some people think every childwill benefit from a fourth skill added to the list: computer skills. To whatextent do you agree or disagree?
晦涩的基础学科需要改成选修吗？
Some children find some subjects such asmathematic and philosophy too difficult to learn so some people argue thatthose subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do youagree or disagree?

2. 学历与经验
经验能力：
1.
论点：Excellentcapabilities in handling complex working problems
     在解决复杂工作问题上出色的能力
论据：What matters in work is the capacity to make effectivedecisions when faced with problems challenges and opportunities.
     在工作中重要的是面对问题、挑战和机会时做出有效决定的能力。
2.
论点：Workingexperience is the basic requirement for manyjobs and promotion
     工作经验是很多工作和晋升的基本要求  
论据：Workexperience has better efficiency working performance.
     工作经验带来了更高的效率、更好的工作表现。
高等教育：
1.
论点：Degreesare the entry requirement for most professional jobs
     学历是大多数专业性工作岗位的入门要求
论据：Ordinary people can not grasp thenecessary knowledge and be qualified for the work asking for high degree of specialization.
普通人难以掌握必要的知识并胜任需要高度专业性的工作。
2.
论点：The proof for strong learning ability
     对很强的学习能力的证明
论据：College entrance examination and thefollowing student life trained youngsters how to handle learning new conceptsand grasp new skills.
     大学入学考试和随后的学生生涯训练了年轻人学会如何处理新事物和掌握新技能。

既往真题
高等教育和积累工作经验那个对年轻人职业前景更有利
Some people think that studying in a college oruniversity is the best way for students to be well prepared for their futurecareer while others believe that they should leave school as soon as possibleto develop their career through work experience gained in the workplace.

3. 文化全球化
通用论点论据：
1.
论点：Low cost and efficiency
     低成本和高效率
论据：International common language could savetranslation fee and improve communication efficiency.  
 

2.
论点：Meet the needs ofbusiness social and individual development
     满足商业、社会和个人发展的需要
论据：The popularizationof common language could promote trade and create more job opportunities  
     通用语言的流行可以促进贸易并创造更多的工作机会，
 

既往真题：
评价某些语言更流行而另一些更少人用
Some languages areincreasing in use while many others are declining. Do you think this is apositive or negative development?
城市建筑雷同的原因分析及评价
In the past buildingsoften reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings lookalike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. Whatdo you think is the reason for this and is it a good thing or a bad thing？
国际性的快餐代替传统食物对社会和家庭有负面影响吗？
Traditional food is being replaced byinternational fast foods. This has negative effects on family and society. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?

4. 生活压力
通用论点论据：
原因
1.
论点：Enormouspressure from circumstances
 

论据：Young men are often coping with the new and overwhelmingacademic career and interpersonal relationship challenges. 
年轻人经常都要面对新的、超过承受力的学业、职业和人际关系的压力。
2.
论点：Lackof stable social support
     缺乏稳固的社会支持
论据：Itneeds time to build up their social network and get external support.
     构建他们自己的社交网并取得外部的支持需要时间。
解决
1.
论点：Breakthe deteriorating cycle in living learning and working from origins
      从根源上打破生活、学习和工作中的恶性循环
论据：Thecommunity works as a whole to relieve the heavy living burden and unbelievablelearning and working stress.
全社会共同努力去减轻沉重的生活负担和不可置信的学习和工作压力。
2.
论点：Refinesocial support system
     完善社会支持体系
论据：Bettermedical unemployment and pension benefits definitely will release thecompetition stress on youngsters.
     更好的医疗、失业和养老福利绝对会减轻年轻人身上的竞争压力。

既往真题：
城市快速发展后年轻人面对的问题及解决
Withmajor cities continue growing are there any problems to young people? How tosolve these problems?
晚要小孩的原因分析，对其评价
Today both males and females are having babies at anolder age why? Is this a positive or negative development for society andfamily?
年轻人物质条件变好却不开心的原因和解决
Young people are less happy than before although they arericher safer and healthier. Discuss the reasons and solutions.
工作和生活失衡的原因和解决
Nowadays many people aim to achieve the balance betweentheir work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of theproblems? How to overcome it?

5. 艺术投资
通用论点论据
1.
论点：Bring about great financialpayoff
     带来丰厚的财务回报
论据Public financial support would implement a benigninvestment-returncycle of public services.
     公众财务资助将会建立起公共服务的良性的投资回报循环。
2.
论点：Enrich local residents’ outer life
 

论据：Creating perfect human environment is apriority of government’s work.
     营造良好的人文环境是政府工作的一个重心。

既往真题：
政府是否该花钱布置更多的艺术品来改善城镇和城市的居住环境？
Nowadays towns and cities are becomingattractive places. And some people suggest that the government should spendmoney on putting more works of arts like painting and status to make thembetter to live in. Do you agree or disagree?
政府该把资助艺术家的钱花在其它方面吗？
some people think that the money government spent onsupporting artists (such as pianist poets ...) would be better spent on moreimportant things. Do you agree or disagree give reasons and examples.
政府应不应该减少对文学艺术投资转而投资其它领域？
Arts (like painting and music) does not directly improvepeople's life so government should spend money on other important areas. Doyou agree or disagree?
应该投资于文学艺术还是教育健康？
In some countriesgovernment supports the investment on arts some people think it is justiceothers think it would be better to invest on education and health，what is your opinion and give an example.
和科技相比，艺术对生活独有的意义
Todayadvanced science and technology have made great changes to people’s life butartists such as musicians painters and writers are still highly valued. Whatcan arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
政府的钱只应用于公共服务，不应用于艺术吗？
Somepeople think governments should focus the spending only on public servicesrather than wasting money on arts (music printing etc.). To what extent doyou agree or disagree?
对艺术家的经济支持该来自于政府还是其它来源？
Somepeople think that creative artists should be supported financially by thegovernment of their county while others believe that they should findfinancial support from other sources instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


次级重点：包括以下5个领域，提供主要论点论据
1. 学习强度
通用论点论据
1.
论点：Improveacademic performance            
     提高学习成绩
论据：Theharder students work the better they could understand the intricate detailsabout the basic knowledge in different areas.
     学生们学习的越努力，他们对于不同领域的基础知识的认识就会更加深入。
2.
论点：Thenecessary training for adulthood
     对成年生活的必要训练
论据：Studying isthe main way to using individuals’ minds to better their own understanding ofthe world for children because there are few other methods to contact theoutside world.
      学习是学生们用心了解社会的一个主要的途径，因为他们很少有其它渠道接触外部世界。

既往真题
多学还是精学少数科目？ 
Some people think that older schoolchildren should learnwide range subjects and develop knowledge; other people think that they shouldonly learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and giveyour own opinion.
儿童学习时间过长是积极还是消极的？ 
Children spend long time studying in school and afterschool. What are the positive or negative effects on children and society theylive in?
孩子们该7岁前上学吗？ 
Some think that children should start school as early as possible while othersbelieve that they should start school at the age of seven. Discuss both viewsand give your own opinion.

2. 教育工具
通用论点论据
1.
论点：Improvestandards of literacyand lingual abilities
 

论据：Thestories in books / TV education programs / interesting advertisements can helpchildren build vocabulary and grammar skills.
 

2.
论点：Encourage people to take part in active thinking rather thanpassive one
     鼓励人们参与主动思考而不是被动思考
论据：Reading / TV educationprograms / interesting advertisements is a practical form of brainexercise.
 

既往真题
看电视对孩子是好还是坏？
Some people think watching television is bad for childrenin all ways. Others say it is good for children to get knowledge. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion.
阅读是否比电视对想象力和语言能力的发展更有促进？
It has been believed that people who read for pleasurehave developed imagination and good language skills than those who prefer towatch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

3. 城乡发展
通用论点论据
1.
论点：Higherliving standards and more opportunities for personal development
     更高的生活水平和更多的个人发展机会
论据：Flourishbusiness and production coming from more population and labor will create moresocial wealth and job-positions.
     因更多的人口和劳动力而繁荣的商业和生产将会创造更多的社会财富和工作岗位。
2.
论点：Acceleratethe progress of urbanization and industrialization
 

论据：Moreresidents will mean increased consumption and production capacity which surelyboost trade and booming business and industries.
更多的居民将意味着增加的消费能力，这将繁荣贸易和工商业。

既往真题：
把工商业从大城市迁移到其它地区好吗？
Governments are encouraging industries andbusinesses to move from large cities to regional areas. Do the advantagesoutweigh the disadvantages?
年轻人离开乡村去城市的原因和评价
Young people are leavingtheir homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are thereasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
生活改善上的城乡差距的危害和解决
Some people think the riseof the standard of living benefits cities more than rural areas what problemswill it causes and how to reduce the situation.
大城市生活质量下降的原因及解决
Today the quality of life of people is getting worse in large citieswhat are the causes of this problem? Is there any measures should be taken tosolve it?  

4.广告
通用论点论据
1.
论点：Createthe awareness about products among customers
     使顾客认识产品
论据：Introduce theadvantages of the products to the customer and deepen the relationship betweenadvertising and quality
 

2.
论点：Developbrand identity
 

论据：Reach potentialcustomers at maximum range and build a certain kindof trust
     在最大程度上接触潜在的顾客并建立某种程度的信任

既往真题：
广告是否促进销量而忽视质量
Advertising are encouraging consumers to buy inquantities instead of promoting quality. To what extend do you agree ordisagree?
广告的好处大于坏处吗？
Weare surrounded by all kinds of advertising which is having an increasinginfluence on our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh itsnegative effects?


5. 个人发展
计划未来
1.
论点：Be crucial for meeting needs during each step towards successwith limited time money or other resources
    对于使用有限的时间、金钱和其它资源来满足通往成功的路上的每一步的需要十分重要
论据：With careful planning people often can see if at some point theyare likely to face a problems that they can avoid or prepare well for a comingcrisis.
     有了详细的计划，人们能够预见到什么时候他们会遇到什么问题，进而针对即将到来的危机进行规避或做出良好准备。
2.
论点：Achieveeffective time management by avoiding unnecessaryand unfocused steps
     通过避免不必要的无目的的行为来实现高效的时间管理
论据：When following a plan individuals can always see where theyare in the progress towards ob<x>jects and make good decisions on where to go orwhat to do next.
     在按照计划进行中，人们总是知道其在实现目标的过程中的位置，从而就下一步的方向和内容做出正确的决定。
关注当前
1.
论点：Theonly way to take responsibility for the life
     唯一对生命负责的做法
论据：Peopleneed to move on and put plans into real action otherwise all the goals arejust possibilities and can not come true by themselves.
     人们需要行动并把计划变成实践，否则所有的目标只能是可能性而不会自己变为现实。
2.
论点：Maximizethe outcome of the current effort
     使眼下的努力的效果最大化
论据：Misgivings and fear would slow the work down and makethings look harder.
     瞻前顾后会降低效率并让事情看起来变得更难办。
遵循传统
1.
论点：Definethe right behavior rules in the certain culture context
     在特定文化环境下界定正确的行为规则
论据：Traditions encourage groups of people to create and sharecommon codes of conduct.
     传统鼓励人群创造分享共同的行为准则。
2.
论点：Alleviateunnecessary conflicts in interpersonal interaction
     减少人际交往中不必要的矛盾
论据：Traditionslay down a set of values and standards of judgmentfor individual interest conflicts.
 

特立独行
1.
论点：Morecreativity and driving power for future development
     更多的创造力和驱动力来推动未来发展
论据：Youngsters could get thechances to contribute their vitality andfresh ideas to change the existing technology and social system.
     年轻人能够得到机会来为改变现存的科技和社会模式贡献他们的活力和新点子。
2.
论点：Moreopportunities for personal development originating from others’ attention
     他人关注所带来的更多的个人发展机会
论据：Peopletend to pay close attention to and follow the ones who can loosen the bonds of outdated traditional viewsbecause the latter could help them break away from old rules and conventions. 
     人们倾向于密切关注并跟随那些摆脱过时的传统观念的束缚的人，因为后者能够帮助他们打破常规。

既往真题
同意计划未来不如专注当前吗？
Some people now think that planning future is a waste oftime and prefer to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?
年轻人该遵循传统还是特立独行？
Some people think young people should follow thetradition of the society. Others think young people should be free to behave asindividual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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