2015年5月24日托福写作真题强化解析版

写作

综合写作参考答案

None of the three hypotheses in the reading have exactly confirmed the identity of Pearl Poet.

Firstly, from the perspective of the manuscript, the professor states his doubt, because according to the lecture, it argues that books in that period are hand-made copies and it is probable that the book of four poems and by Massey were copied by the same copier.

Secondly, judging from the shared subject matter and use of alliteration, the professor holds a different view, because referring to the lecture, the dialect Hugh was using was quite different from that adopted by the Pearl Poet, which indicates that Hugh is not the poet.

Thirdly, on the point of the joint work by several authors, the professor never fails to express his concern, because in terms of the lecture, there are some uncommon words appearing more than once in the poems and these words are seldom observed in other works of literature, which well elaborates the efforts by a single author.

独立写作

Which of the following is the best way for a student to make new friends

- Joining a sports team

- Volunteering for a community activity

- Traveling

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

参考答案

Advancement of modern technology seems to have made the world a smaller one, when people in any corner of the world can make easy access to their peer regardless of long distance and time zone. However, the truth is that an increasing number of people have started to realize that their social network is narrowing down that it is quite necessary to enlarge the social network. The so-called most effective ways to make friends are stated above, and personally, to volunteer for a community activity might be a good choice.

First of all, people who volunteer share the same quality--empathy. A multiple of people engage in social activities because of their personal concern to the helpless. For example, there are a great number of non-profit organizations in the world to help people out of different kinds of troubles. These people, looking forward to the same direction, tend to be more united than the normal and they are more likely to be friends, partners, and allies.

Moreover, people with good heart tend to be more open to strangers. People involved in the community work have to help the strangers, and that is the essence of the work, to make strangers warm. Different to the ordinary people who have set barriers to strangers, these people have to open their heart and accept the people unfamiliar, and this is how friendship blossoms in the very beginning. Therefore, participants of volunteer work are more likely to make friends in the process of helping people.

Furthermore, the sincerity built up in the process of helping and being helped will sustain. To the helpers, the fragrance always stays the hand that gives roses. They are delighted to be helping. While to the people who are being helped, gratitude and appreciation last throughout their life. No doubt the mercy will be paid back one day, and this is how love prolongs.

To conclude, to volunteer is on one hand to help those who are in need of help, and on the other hand, make friends with people who share the same quality, empathetic, open-hearted and sincere.

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