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题目：Do you agree or disagree: It is easier to maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past.【2013.12.15】

文章分析：
　　题型：今昔对比
　　论点：让步
　　角度：利弊分析

开头：同意现在更容易比以前保持身体健康。（话题引入+展示争论的话题 +我的观点及过渡）

The desire for good health is universal. From past to present, people have been striving for physical fitness through any possible ways such as taking medicines or doing exercise. The fundamental importance of being healthy keeps itself a permanent topic and recently people begin to ponder over a question: is it easier to maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past? As far as I am concerned, modern people are more likely to achieve a good health condition than people in the past. My reasons and examples are given below.（92字）

中间段1：现代社会医学发达，很多疾病得以有效治疗和预防，极大地保证人民健康，延长其生命。（主题句+解释+细节扩展）

Firstly, more advanced medical science makes it possible that most common diseases can be controlled or cured efficiently. Along with the ever-accelerating development of science and technology come breakthroughs in different disciplines linked to medical science like chemistry, biology and anatomy. The combination of those fruits has been pushing medical science to a higher level. Scientists have found solutions to many diseases that used to be thought as fatal, maintaining people’s health and extending people’s lifespan. For example, smallpox, an eradicated disease nowadays, was once a number one killer engulfing tens of thousands of people’s lives. But with the invention of a certain vaccine, people put an end to this rampant disease. （110字）

 中间段2：现代人能接触到更多的健身设施。（主题句+解释+细节扩展）

Secondly, it is easier for modern people to access sports facilities than people in the past. With government’s increasing investment on improvement of population’s physical quality, people, especially those living in the city, find sports facilities almost everywhere such as basketball courts, swimming pools, and fitness equipment around the neighborhood. Apart from the efforts made by the government, people’s mounting awareness of keeping fit makes health and fitness a giant business. For example, gyms, skating rinks, and bowling alleys become a hit all over the world especially among kids and teenagers. Undoubtedly, those easily available sports facilities scattering through the city give all citizens a chance to be healthier. （110字）

让步段：当然，现代人压力大，（承认主观点不到位的地方+打压）

Admittedly, the desire for a better life and intense competition bring modern people unprecedented stress. Most of people are not able to keep a regular life. For instance, they sleep at a late hour and choose smoking or drinking to release pressure, which puts them in a sub-healthy state. However, if they could realize the importance of health and give up on the unhealthy lifestyle, modern people’s health condition is supposed to be much better.（76字）

结尾：重申观点，归纳理由/升华主题

To put it in a nutshell, it is easier to maintain good health for people nowadays than it was in the past. It is not only because there is a higher level of medical care, but also there are countless sports facilities. But what is more important is that people should have a real determination to say goodbye to bad living habits and 100% carry out their fitness schedule. （69字）

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　　extend one’s lifespan
　　cure the diseases
　　bring unprecedented stress
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　　ever-accelerating

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