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雅思写作常见错误分析:综合性语言错误

2015-07-09

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新通天津为大家收集整理了雅思写作常见错误分析:综合性语言错误。受到中文思维的影响,同学们的雅思写作考试中总会出现一些错误,导致成绩不理想。希望以下内容对大家的雅思备考有所帮助!

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雅思写作是考生最头疼也是最难取得高分的科目,尽管很多考生在考试前做了大量的练习和模拟训练,但写作成绩提高的幅度仍旧不明显。分析认为,常见的原因主要有训练不得法,教师指导质量不高,语言技能弱等。根据笔者多年在写作方面的教学经验,考生在写作上常犯的错误大致总结为以下方面:

综合性语言错误(comprehensive misusage)

所谓综合性语言错误是指在雅思写作中除了上述10种错误外的诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等错误。如:

1. Today money to everyone is very importance, our’s cloths, live, eat, go etc.

分析:

“our”是人称代词的所有格形式,可以单独作形容词使用,没必要使用’s形式,而且后面应该跟名词。

改为:Today money to everyone is very important, for example, our eating, clothing, living, going ,etc.

了解了上述常见错误后,就带大家通过几篇考生的雅思范文,来深入了解这些错误发生的频率和改进这些错误后会给文章带来的质的改变:

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例一:

Writing task 1 (Cambridge 1- page 51):

The diagram shows the process of collecting information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts in Australia Bureau of Meteorology. It can be clearly seen that information goes through three main stages until it can be broadcast. These stages are incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally, broadcast.

As it is shown in the diagram, first, information is gathered via satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. The information from satellite is transmitted to radar. Satellite, itself, takes photos. All the information provided by these three tools are integrated into satellite photos, radar screen, and synoptic charts. Then, they are analyzed and forecast. This information is sent to computers in order to prepare the broadcast. Finally, up-to-date information is broadcast via TV, radio, and recorded announcement.

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In conclusion, the diagram shows that there are various stages in preparing and broadcast of latest news on the weather and that radar has a fundamental role in gathering data. Also, the most comprehensive information is obtained from synoptic charts.

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