2015年4月18日托福写作真题及解析

作文
综合写作
passage:
white orca spotted in Alaska and the one spotted in Russia can not be the same individual:
1)the slight difference in the skin color
2)two sightings are far away
3)the dorsal fins remain the same

professor:
it is possible to be the same individual
1) orcas’ skin can change in color season to season due to the growth of algae on the skin
2) different groups of orcas have different life styles:
the mammal hunting group: remains near the coast as the passage says, but the fishing hunting group can travel 2000 kilometer in the open ocean.
3)the dorsal fin will not grow when the orcas is 20 years old. So it is inaccurate to estimate the age of the orcas by its dorsal fins.
阅读提到在 Alaska 和 Russia 发现的白色逆戟鲸可能不是同一品种，理由有三：肤色有细微差异；发现的两地相隔很远；不同年龄，但背上的鳍一样听力和阅读意见不一，觉得有可能就是同种鲸，理由也对应有三个：鲸的肤色会随季节变化；不同鲸群生活方式不同，不一定住得近；鲸在 20 岁后鳍就停止生长了，所以不能用鳍去判断。
我们可以用以下模板把上述内容串起来：
In the lecture, the professor made several points about...
The professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that...
The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to....
The first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that...
According to the professor....differs from the reading in that the reading states.....The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading because ... Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is... The professor claims that...
However, the reading states... This point is contradicted by.....
Finally, the professor stated that, on the contrary of reading ,.. In other words ,.. This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates, because...
独立写作
it is more important to have a dream, even if it is too ambitions than to have a realistic goal.
独立写作又探讨了雄心壮志和生活现实的矛盾，对于以往机经熟悉的同学会记得我们有过找一份容易入职的工作还是找一份自己理想的工作之间选择的题目，这都是对于理想和现实的对比。我们可以 keep ambitious and have a dream in that it drives people on the way to chase a life of higher quality；as well a dream could give people courage to overcome the  obstacles with a belief and a faith their dream bestows；having a dream doesn’t equal being unrealistic, realistic goals are set to pave ways for the ultimate goal
我们也可以接地气地找个小目标，觉得现实更重要的考生可以从目标大，容易受挫；小目标为我们提供生活保障，这是最基础的生存条件；目标定得太高会不切实际，反而不利于人们脚踏实地去奋斗等等出发。
 

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