2015年11月19日雅思写作考试解析

　　Task 1  

　　The map shows the plan of a new town.

　　Sample answer

　　The map gives some information about the projections of a new town.

　　In the centre of this town, it is planned that there will be some bus stations and parking lots, with four roads leading to four different directions (north, southeast, south and west respectively). Around the stations and parking lots will be housing areas.So it is convenient for people to travel to and from different areas.

　　These housing areas will be surrounded by ring roads, which can link these houses together. On the outskirts of this town, two big industrial areas will be constructed. It is expected that one of them will be located in the southeastern corner and the other one will be built in the northwestern corner. This will provide a great number of job opportunities for the local people. Also, the rest areas will be occupied with houses in order to accommodate the workers.

　　Overall, the new town will provide a good environment for people as the transportation facilities are wisely designed and many job opportunities can be provided.

　　Task 2  

　　分析：这道题目属于政府的职能类考题，但是和艺术和体育结合在了一起，所以难度有些增加。考生们一方面可以从政府的职能出发，说政府的钱来自于纳税者，所以应该投在更加重要的领域;也可以从投资社区艺术和体育或者学校艺术和体育的优缺点出发进行谋篇布局。

　　Sample answer

　　Word counts: 310

　　One of the government duties and responsibilities is to pour its funds to the area of sports and art which can add spice to people’s life. The discussion centers on whether the fund should be allocated to campus sport and art or to the professional counterparts in communities. From a more holistic point, I am in favor of the view that social sports and art events are supposed to receive more government financial aid.

　　If governments spend more grants in professional sports and events, the value and benefit of sports and arts can be appreciated by more public. A larger number of people ranging from the sports enthusiasts and art fans can be found in communities and the well-funded sports and art events can cater for their needs and bring them more physical and mental enjoyment. Therefore, the core value presented by sports and arts can be better realized and admired by the public. By comparison, sport and art in school are in the subordinate place, which are usually regarded as pastime by most students and teachers.

　　The sports and art events in community can also boost communication and interaction in neighborhood. People tend to go out their doors to view or participate in the various sports or arts events if the government pours more money into communities. And they can share their understanding when enjoying the works of art or cultivate a sense of belonging when taking part in sports events.

　　On the other hand, sport and art events in school are also worth government attention. Schools are usually short in funds and the financial assistance from governments can make school life more diverse and colorful. However, the fund allocated to schools can generate fewer benefits and other non-government organisations can donor some amount of money to meet the requirement.

　　To conclude, the government should sponsor the sports and art activities in community even if schools are also in need of financial support.

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