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托福写作预测题目一
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Government has done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.
贾重涛老师点评:从9月5日[政府是否应该花钱维护古老的建筑]之后,再未出现过政府相关话题,所以列为第一重点。
立场:Disagree
R1. Unhealthy eating is pretty widespread.
R2. It is difficult for all the civilians to strike a balance between work and life.
主体段1讲解:
First of all, healthy eating has not yet been implemented. The best evidence of this is that on television screen there are a great variety of fast food advertisements that are alluring viewers to eat. People especially young children are so obsessed with those exquisite, juicy and delicious hamburgers and French fries that they eat a lot of them despite how many times that parents tell them the potential danger.
Another critical issue is the unhealthy eating habit, which is common in young adult group. Many of them who are too busy with morning work just skip breakfast and get to lunch directly or at most, eating fast food instead. Both of these urge government to emphasize the importance of eating healthily.
本段首句话点明中心,健康食谱未健全,言外之意需要政府关注。随后用快餐问题解释,虽然人们都知晓快餐引发肥胖,但由于广告吸引人、味道可口,人们依然很喜欢摄取。
第二层表明人们过于忙碌,也无法按时做饭,只能选择快餐,最后总结概括。
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高分亮点
implement healthy eating policy 完善机制
be obsessed with 喜欢
despite how many time that… 不管…
skip breakfast 不吃早点
urge government to undertake the measure敦促某人做某事
托福写作预测题目二
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Teachers should not express political ideas in class.
贾重涛老师点评:学校教育将会是圣诞节期间最常考的题目;此外,10月-11月都是共出了5个教育话题,说明12月的重头戏依旧是教育话题。
范文赏析:
Last but not least, it is surely a great idea that teacher introduces certain bits of politics towards students in class because words from teacher are more convincing and also magically motivate students to learn about politics to some extent.
However, limited by experience and knowledge scope, teacher may have biased opinions about politics, which is bound to mislead students afterwards. For example, a teacher in favor of Democratic Party tends to advocate policy issued by democrats and exaggerate its role in society while demeaning the contribution that Republican Party made.
Such behavior is very ubiquitous in classroom according to students. Students instilled by such thought may oppose the other party, causing social chaos and shake the base of this nation. So, to prevent this from occurring, teacher should think twice before talking anything like this in class.
首先让步说明教师探讨政治还是有一定好处的,可以开阔学生眼界。然后用however转折说明教师受限于自己的知识、理解和经验,讲述的政治看法会干扰甚至是误导学生们的判断。用美国两党之争来解释,增加说服性。
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高分亮点
biased opinion 偏见
issue policy 签署政策
demean Democratic 贬低某人
instill the thought of… 灌输思想
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