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雅思作文技能get:主语替换

2015-12-31

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  雅思小作文要想获得高分,进行灵活的主语替换必不可少,下面,新通外语雅思写作名师安冬芳给大家整理了一些小作文主语替换的一些方式和方法,供大家参考使用。

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雅思小作文的写作,如果要写得生动或者是要7分以上的高分,那么我们就一定要注意如何去把雅思小作文的主语写的很灵活。因为大部分的烤鸭都只会在写纵坐标。也就说是The percentage / number/ figure of ***** is / increase 类似于这样的句式。但是全文如果全是这样的句子,尽管我们做一些简单的词语替换,我们也是没有办法改变很low 甚至是very repeated 重复唠叨的感觉。因此,我们的主语替换很重要。

再者说,在静态图形的写作方面,我们估计是必须要用到主语替换了。原因是什么呢?静态的图形不能写Increase or decrease 这样表示动态的图形,所以就不能在词汇方面做到很灵活。一些灵活的句式变化,大部分也是针对于动态图图形的。所以主语变化在静态的table, pie 和bar chart 中就是我们必备的技能get. 下面,我来给大家介绍一下小作文主语替换的一些方式和方法。希望大家能够掌握。
  下面我们来看一下如下的两个柱状图,对比分析并且分析主语。

雅思小作文

OG TEST 4 
  雅思小作文2
 
  1, 以纵坐标为主语
  The percentage of British people giving money to charity by age-group 36-50 was the largest, at 42%.
  The revenue from international tourism was the largest in 2000, which stood at 8 billion pounds.

2,以人为主语
  The British people giving money to charity by age-group 36-50 occupied the largest proportion, at 42%.
  VS
  The British people aged 36-50 donated the greatest percentage of money to charity, which occupied 42%.
  The oversea consumers spent the most( **) on the international tourism in 2000.

3, 以国家为主语 country
  Britain had the largest amount of donation from the age-group 36-50.
  Southland had the largest amount of export revenue/volume( ) from international tourism in 2000.

4, 以数据为主语
  42% of British people aged 36-50 gave money to charity, which was the largest figure.
  8 billion pounds of export revenue came from /was brought/gained/earned by international tourism in 2000, which was the largest figure compared with other categories.

5, 以时间为主语
  The year 1990 witnessed the largest amount of donation from the age group 36-50.

那我们再来看一下table 题目中是否可以进行变化
  练习就是剑桥7的test 1
  这是一个静态的table ,也是很多同学们在写的时候 觉得很难很困惑的一个table.

C7T1主语变化
  1, 纵坐标
  1, The spending on food, drink and tobacco in Turkey represented the largest proportion
  2, 人
  2, People in Turkey spent most on food, drink and tobacco
  3, 以国家为主语
  3, Turkey had the largest spending on food, drink and tobacco.
  4, 以数据为主语
  **% of the spending in Turkey went into food drink and tobacco.

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