2016年1月23日雅思写作考情分析

第一个饼图：对比全球不同国家咖啡的生产情况；
第二个饼图：对比这些国家的咖啡消费情况；
第三个饼图：对比国家之间的咖啡盈利情况。

 

补充关于饼图相关词汇：
(1)表占据：occupy，comprise，constitute, account for, make up, take up
E.g.: Males accounted for 10% of the whole workforce.
Students take/make up roughly 20% of the group.
(2)表由...组成，包括几部分：be make up of..., be composed of ..., consist of ...
(3)最大：biggest，hugest，largest，leading
(4)表最大句型：…ranks the first place which occupies…%
(5)表最小句型：…ranks the last/final place which occupies…%

 

题目：News media has become more influential in people’s lives. Others believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

分析：作文题型是传统的同意或不同意类议论文，题材也是媒体类，算是考生比较不陌生的话题。作文结构也可以分成传统的四段式。

 

开头段：改写文章题目，提供大背景

 

中间段：
第一段：提出新闻媒体的缺点
a.新闻媒体经常报道不好的新闻

News media often describe depressing events in details, such as crimes, disasters, conflicts and so forth, which accordingly generate panic or worries among public.

b.新闻媒体有时候会带有偏见，或是通过报道部分事实或者是扭曲文本来达到控制公众思维的目的。

Some biased news media only report parts of the facts, instead of the whole story, or distort some events using ambiguous words in order to manipulate public’s thoughts and feelings.

 

第二段: 提出新闻媒体的优点：
However, the benefits of news media override its negative influences
 a.新闻媒体给公众提供各式各样的信息 Public can acquire vast amounts of information in various forms through access to newspaper, television, magazines, radio and Internet.

b.新闻媒体提供公众交流的平台 News media provide a public platform for individuals to communicate with journalists and even celebrities. In most cases, release of new films, musical albums, novels is actualized through news media. Common people can deliver their appreciation or criticism on social networking websites or newspaper, some of whom might even have the opportunity to interact with those authors or celebrities about their works.

 

结尾段：进一步总结自己的论点，虽然新闻媒体给公众带来很多负面影响，但它给我们带来的优势更多。

 

类似真题：
11.11.17 Some people think newspaper is the most effective way to get the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

12.03.17 News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?

 

 

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