2016年10月22日托福写作高分范文来袭！

资深托福培训师任静老师说，“环境和教育这两大类一直是ETS最钟爱的热门话题，今天与大家分享两篇高分范文，童鞋们要仔细研究题目的分析要点和高分句型，并且尽量熟练掌握，以便在自己考试过程中能够灵活运用噢！10月22号很有可能会考到。”

10月22日托福写作之教育类话题题目：

School should be more focused on improving facilities (libraries, computers, or labs) for students than on hiring famous teachers.

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1.增加入学率，带来经济效益--要善于运用因果推到论证
2.为学生提供便利--图书馆有更多的资源  实验室更加先进的设备--小分论点，展开细节
3.让步：服务的人数相对提升设施服务的人数少，且有其他的途径接触--让步+对比论证

10月22日托福写作高分范文： 【在线咨询】

The school is always a place where each decision or change attracts attention of both students and parents. Where the money should be invested does never stop arguing. Some people hold the statement that schools are supposed to hire famous teachers for improving whole level of study quality. Yet, from my perspective, I firmly contend that improving facilities will bring more benefits for the school and students.

First of all, improving facilities, unquestionably, will attract more students to choose this school so that its enrollment will increase a lot. According to the data of google website, students and parents incline to regard the school with relatively higher-quality facilities as their first choice. Hence, with a rising number of students choosing this school, the whole financial condition and even the reputation will be improved. And because of the better financial situation, the school will have ability to hire more teachers, to meet more needs of students and parents. As a result, this school will be more prestigious. And this will be a positive recycle. Therefore, from a long-term development, schools should focus more on completing facilities.

In addition, students will have better study space and resources as more money invested in improving facilities. Libraries are very essential places for almost every student, especially for undergraduates and graduates, where they will spend most time in searching for resources, finishing their assignments, discussing problems and etc. Consequently, improving libraries will not only supply more space for students to have a comfortable and quiet environment to study, but also support students with more and better resources to study and discuss. Besides, like laboratories, if a school, particularlyfor higher education, desires to have more scientific achievements and cultivate more scientific talents, it should provide financial aid to introduce advanced equipment and other materials.

Finally, though hiring famous teachers does bring more specialized instructions for students, this kind of advantage only benefits relatively fewer people than the above approach do . The energy of these famous instructors is limited, and their knowledge and abilities are specialized for certain fields rather than for all students. But improving the facilities will serve each students. Furthermore, schools have other alternative approaches to make students connect with famous professors and even receive instructions from them, such as holding lectures, establishing inter-school courses and so forth.

Concerning all these benefits discussed above, I firmly convince that improving and completing facilities rather than hiring more famous teachers will benefit more for both schools and students.

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10月22日托福写作之环境类话题题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past.

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（善于运用段内分论点，充分扩展）
保护环境的意识提升（1.公民意识提升  2.政府意识--投资、法案）
科技进步（治理污染的方法以及工业原料）

10月22日托福写作高分范文： 【在线咨询】

According to recent data of health state, an increasing number of people are subjected to various illnesses, such as bronchitis and asthma, caused by environmental pollution. Since environmental issues have been threatening everyone’s health all around the world, there are numerous solutions and global responses that have been proposed or initiated already. Though some people contend that environmental destruction is irreversible, in my opinion, concerning people doing efforts to rescue our earth, the nature can be restored in the future.

（啊哦，精彩段落被“心机达达”拿走了......）

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