11.5托福写作预测
托福大作文中我们经常会看到一种题目是问政府应该把钱投入到小学教育还是大学教育中，或者问钱应该是用于植树还是用于建造房屋，我们今天我来学习下这种问法的题目我们应该怎么来写：
题目：
The money spent by governments on space program would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. Do you agree or disagree?
首先大家在审题的时候一定看清楚人家是怎么问的，明显题目是问你是否同意：钱应该投入到公共服务而不是外太空探险，但是有的同学没仔细看可能就把意思完全理解反了，在开始动笔写之前，大家一定要先构思，如果这题我们写成同意，那么中间主体段两段就应该写成为什么不要再在外太空上花钱以及把钱花在公共服务上的好处。
一起来看一下我们的开头段如何来写，大家在写开头段的时候一定要注意，开头段不要写得太啰嗦，三句话: 引出题目, 表明自己的观点，理由如下即可。A fast, effective and short introduction is better. 按照这样的要求写出来的开头段就是这样的：
It is true that governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on space exploration program. I completely agree with the idea that these are a waste of money, and that the funds should be allocated to public services. To verify the validity of my perspective, I will give a couple of compelling reasons.
接下来我们一起来看下主体段的写法。大家在展开主体段的时候，主要可以采用两种结构来写，一种是topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally的结构，另外一种是idea + explain + example的结构，这两种展开方式最最主要的区别是你到底能够想出几个点来论述这个主体段落，如果是只有一个点那么大家就是采用idea + explain + example来展开，而如果大家能够想出不止一个点，大家就可以采取topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally这样的形式来展开了，下面这两个主体段我们都是采用topic sentence + firstly + secondly + finally的结构，很明显，从更多的点来进行展开，写起来肯定会更加容易一些。
There are several reasons why space program should be abandoned. First of all, it is extremely expensive to train scientists and other staff involved with space missions, and facilities and equipment also come at a huge cost to the government. Secondly, these programs do not benefit normal people in our daily lives; they are simply vanity projects for politicians. Finally, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. The Challenger space shuttle disaster, for example, showed us that space travel is extremely dangerous, and in my opinion it is not worth the risk.
I believe that the money from space program should go to vital public services instead. It is much cheaper to train doctors, teachers, police and other public service workers than it is to train astronauts or the scientists and engineers who work on space exploration projects. In addition to this, public servants do jobs that have a positive impact on every member of society. For example, we all use schools, hospitals and roads, and we all need the security that the police provide. If governments reallocated the money spent on space travel and research, many thousands of people could be lifted out of poverty or given a better quality of life.
最后一段是结尾段，结尾段通常只需要一句话就可以了，重申下自己的观点即可。跟我们开头段一样，结尾段同样不要写得太啰嗦太复杂，我们应该把尽量多的精力放在主体段上面。
In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend money on services that benefit all members of society, and it is wrong to waste resources on projects that do not improve our everyday lives.
最后，给总结下我们托福大作文的一些注意点，大家在写作时首先得把题目看清楚，不能偏题。其次在写作时候要注意逻辑性，不仅仅是全文写成总分总结构，还要注意段落内部的结构，注意展开主体段时候的一个逻辑性和条理性。此外，写托福大作文的时候大家要注意用词的多样性以及准确性，而不是一味地用一些偏词或者怪词。最后一定得保证整篇文章是没有语法错误的。只有同时满足这些条件，才能写出一篇good的大作文，否则很多同学会发现每次大作文都卡在fair这一档，上不去。
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