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雅思大作文宠物话题思路分析（中文原文）： 【在线咨询】

随着科技的进步一些公司研发出非常逼真的玩具狗，这随之引发了人们关于宠物狗是否能取代宠物狗的讨论。（背景+改写题目）虽然玩具狗已经具备了很多宠物狗的特性，但是仍然无法取代宠物狗带给我们的欢乐。（阐明观点）

养过狗的人都知道我们之所以会养狗一定不是因为它们像一个玩具，而是因为狗狗和我们一样，有血有肉，有情感。（主题句，也是正方总论点）首先，狗狗对你忠诚、专一，在它们小小的世界里，主人就是全部。（分论点1）看过《忠犬八狗》的人一定不会忘了那只名叫八公的秋田犬在主人走后那么多年依然在和主人分别的地方痴痴守候。（举例）还有很重要的一点，狗狗毛绒绒的，抱起来暖暖的。（分论点2）这种感觉不是一个冰冷的电子玩具可以替代的。（对比）

然而有些人认为玩具狗可以替代宠物狗也不是没有原因的。（主题句，也是反方总论点）第一，目前研发出来的玩具狗已经可以供用户逗乐。（分论点1）比如当你抱着它的时候，你可以听到它内部的伺服电机转动的声音。（举例）此外，这款机器狗比宠物狗还要便宜省事。（分论点2）他们的售价仅为120美元，而且不需要喂狗粮节省了后续成本、不需要遛狗节省了养狗的时间、不需要洗澡梳毛省却了养狗的麻烦。（解释） 但是如果人们怕养一只狗狗要喂食、铲屎、遛狗很麻烦，那也就永远体会不到它们带来的快乐和感动。（驳论）

简而言之，虽然玩具狗有一些确实存在的优点，但是鉴于养狗的真正目的在于情感的交流和陪伴，我们仍然有充分理由相信玩具狗是无法代替宠物狗的。（总结全文，重申观点）

雅思大作文宠物话题高分范文：  【在线咨询】

Recent decades have witnessed the advances in science and technology , which promote the appearance of some lifelike toy dogs researched and developed by some high-tech companies. This has fuelled the controversy over the discussion whether the pet dogs can be replaced by them. Although the vivid toys have had a number of characteristics and properties of pets, they cannot take the place of the joy brought by pets.

All of the people who have the experience of raising dogs know the reason why we keep them is they have real feeling and emotion just like our human being, but not for they are like toys. First of all, dogs are loyal and devoted, and their masters are all of their little world. It is so touching and unforgettable that in the movie Hachico Hachico, an Japanese Akita, had been waiting for his master for so many years until his death at the place where he last saw his master’s leaving. Another important point is that dogs are usually fuzzy and fluffy, and we can feel their warm when we hug them. This feeling can hardly be given by a cold electronic toy.

On the other hand, it is also reasonable that some people think these electronic toys can replace the pets. Firstly, it is not impossible that the current version of toy dogs can bring users fun. For example, when users hug the toys, they can hear the sound of servo motor rotation. Besides, these toy dogs are much cheaper and save more trouble than the real ones. They only cost 120 US dollars, in addition to which they save the following expenditure on feeding, the time on dog walking, and the trouble of giving them a bath or brush. However, if people regard feeding, cleaning and walking as trouble, they cannot feel the joy and affection brought by the lovely dogs. 

In brief, despite the merits of electronic toy dogs do exist, given that the real purpose of raising a dog is to have emotional communication and companionship, we still have ample reasons to believe that they cannot replace pet dogs.

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