2016年12月10日托福写作预测&高分范文

最近国际政治云谲波诡，远的不说，韩国的政治就有点让人摸不着头脑。不过最近事件渐渐明晰，看来双赢的破局已经不可能，朴槿惠的退休生活指日可待，只不过是时间问题和形式问题了。作为国内的吃瓜群众，实在不知道说什么评语，只能提前祝福朴槿惠同志有一个幸福的晚年吧。

说回到托福的考试，最近的一些话题就可以列举一些时下正在发生的时事，而不是千篇一律的马云和Steve Jobs，这样完全可以给raters一个关心时事和独立思考的印象哦！酱紫的话，印象分up up肯定不话下了~

今天的韩心宇老师给大家一个托福写作机经题目和结合时事的论证段，希望大家好好揣摩，最后形成自己的论证思路哦！

托福写作题目：
Making decisions by ourselves or asking for other’s help?

托福写作主体论证段1：

Making decisions by ourselves can provide us with precious opportunities to achieve independence. Let’s take into account this scenario: if we are dealing with certain questions, what first comes to our mind is to ask others for help; then we will be reluctant to think independently or to utilize our own wisdom to cope with the adversity, which will impede us from improving ourselves. With regard to these drawbacks, solving problems by ourselves manifests its significance.  My view can be exemplified by a research conducted by my university: the researchers drafted a questionnaire, in which people choose what is the underlying reason of their success and achievement. The result  indicates that 87% of the informants voted for “independent thinking”, indicating that thinking independently plays an irreplaceable role in our life. This figure further testifies to the importance of making decisions on our own. (141)

托福写作主体论证段2：

Listening to others advice may lead to a passive situation, since we may make improper decisions and thus do harm to ourselves, or even to certain people related to the situation. There is a famous saying in China” the most suitable decision is the best decision,”  so asking for others’ advice is simply not a wise way to make serious decision. Here is a case in point. Park Geun-hye is the current president of South Korea. However, she trusted the person from a mysterious cult simply because this person is her “bestie”. In this way, once this scandal was exposed, the whole country went angry, because the president should shoulder the responsibility of making important decision by herself and the most eligible person. Now, she is in a passive situation and nothing seems to ameliorate it.  As we can see from this case, listening to others means we risk being misled by others. So, always relying on ourselves is the best choice without doubt. (165)

希望今天的托福写作高分范文分享对大家能有所帮助。

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