在同学们写托福作文的时候，会时常遇到一类题目是问你A好还是B更好。很多同学在遇到此类题目的时候很容易就写离题了,要么写成了A好不好,要么写成B好不好，写出来的文章就是只有一半的关键词。注意题目里面问到的是谁会更加好，建议大家在遇到这类题目的时候，两个方面都要去提到这样就不会偏题，比如我们一起来看下面这道题目：
some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
首先大家注意审题，因为问的是prefer，所以尽量是stay with friends和stay alone都要提到。首先是我们的开头段，开头段建议就给三句话就可以了，分别是introduce the topic, give a general answer,以及here are my reasons类似套路的句子，具体写法如下：
Some people like to be alone while others prefer to stay with their friends. Personally, i prefer to spend my time with my friends. To verify the validity of my perspective, i will give a couple of compelling reasons.
这种类型的大作文主体段建议写两段，一段写staying with friends的优点，一段写staying alone的缺点。主体段段落的第一句话先给出中心句，告诉别人你这段话的中心思想是什么，并且写的时候尽量从不同的角度去展开，尽量多的去给出一些details，可以通过举出一些实例等等来充分论述观点，否则写出来的文章就会显得论述不够充分，具体的写法可以参考下下面这两段话：
There are several benefits to staying with our close friends. Firstly, my friends keep me from feeling lonely. If I want to do something, I invite a friend or friends and we do it together. It is fun to get to the movies, shopping, or even to the library to study with friends. It isn’t fun to do anything alone. In addition to this, I learn a lot from my friends. A friend might invite me to a movie that I haven’t ever heard of. A friend might tell me about a trip she took or a book she read. A friend might have a different point of view about a political issue. I learn a lot of new and interesting things by sharing with my friends.
I would argue that staying alone is detrimental in various aspects. On the one hand, spending our time alone may give us a strong sense of loneliness, isolation and worry, because we have to do many things on our own. We may, for example, read in library, eat dinner or watch movies in cinemas alone and at this time we may hope that someone is there for us. On the other hand, we also miss out on the opportunity to learn from others. As everyone is unique in the world, establishing new contact is a precious chance for us to learn from others and better ourselves. Therefore, always staying alone can have plenty of negative influences on us.
结尾段不要写得太过于啰嗦，一般建议重申下自己的总观点，或者再罗列一下分论点即可，具体写法大家可以参照下下面这个结尾段的写法：
In conclusion, based on the reasons discussed above, I strongly believe that it is much more beneficial for us to stay with our close friends, for spending time with friends can give us a sense of safety and teach us important lessons.
大家可以模仿上面这篇文章的写法，练习一下下面这些托福题目，写作文的时候不可以全部都是短句子，但也记住也不能全部是长句子，要做到长句短句穿插着使用，句式表达丰富准确：
1.It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
2.Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climates. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
3.Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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