2017年3月25日雅思考试写作预测

小作文建议大家重点看一下饼图


　　小作文文章结构：
　　1.introduction: one sentence; paraphrase the question
　　2.overview:2 sentences; the main/general trends
　　3.details
　　4.details
　　注意：No personal opinions/No conclusion

小作文我们总共写四段，第一段是针对题目进行一个改写，注意不可以照抄上去，否则开头段内容不算词数，可以参考以下写法：

开头段：
　　The pie charts compare the proportions of people falling into three distinct age groups in Yemen and Italy in two different years.

第二段是我们的概述段，概述段没有说必须要写什么内容，但是记住不可以给出具体的details，大致地用两句话把图表中的信息概括出来即可，可以参考以下写法：

概述段： 
　　It is clear that Italy had the older population in the year 2000, and that the same is predicted for the year 2050. The populations of both countries are expected to age over the fifty-year period.

接下去用两个段落写细节，两个段落可以更好地对信息进行分组，考官在看文章的时候显得结构更加清晰，具体可以参照以下写法：

细节段： 
　　In the year 2000, just over half of the population of Yemen was aged 14 or under, while most Italians (61.6%) fell into the 15 to 59 age group, and only 14.3% were children under 15 years of age. People aged 60 or over accounted for almost a quarter of the Italian population, but only 3.6% of the inhabitants of Yemen.

细节段：
　　By 2050, the proportion of children under 15 is predicted to drop in both countries, most noticeably in Yemen where the figure is expected to fall by 13.1%. On the other hand, the figures for elderly people are expected to rise, by 2.1% in Yemen and a massive 18.2% in Italy. Finally, it is anticipated that the 15 to 59 age group will grow by around 10% in Yemen, but shrink by around 15% in Italy

小作文我们无需再给出一个结尾段，因为概述段里面已经把关键信息都进行了总结

关于大作文，我们一起来看下环境类话题的一个report型题目：
　　Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

首先这个题目一共提出了三个问题，因此这篇文章我们写成三个主体段，总共加起来应该是五个主体段。

首先是我们的开头段，开头段两句话第一句话是introduce the topic,第二句话要给出一个general answer。无需把开头段写得非常长，写开头段要做到effective/short/fast。写出来就是这样的：

Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.

第一个主体段我们就回答第一个问题，第一句话首先给出总起句，概述下你这一段的中心思想是什么，给出中心句非常重要，让考官快速get到你的点，之后围绕中心句来进行展开，我们在展开的时候可以围绕不止一个点来深入下去，写起来会比较容易写到词数，内容也会比较充实，可以参考以下写法：

Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.

按照前面的讲法，我们可以把第二第三个主体段写出来，具体可以参考以下写法：

Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.
 
Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.

最后一段是结尾段，结尾段只需要给出一个句子就可以了，reword your opinion：
 
　　In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.

这样一篇完整的大作文就写出来了，建议大家在写大作文的时候，用6分钟左右进行构思，开头段用5分钟时间，主体段总共大约20分子时间，结尾段5分钟，最后剩下四分钟进行检查。平时练习的时候也可以按照这样的时间分布来练习。

　　

 

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