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题目：

Environment protection is the responsibility of the government. Individual efforts do not count.
　　To what extent do you agree with the above.
　　Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

范文：

There is no doubt that everyone should value environment protection, yet when it comes to estimate the efficiency and effectiveness of protecting environment between government and individual, it is an obvious choice to rely on government to solve most of the problems because of its propaganda ability and coercive capacity.

Introduction首段的重点在于切题引出选择性观点，并在观点之上表述写作主旨。那么本文的切题表述是环保之于每个人都很重要（关联题目所给表述去切题），但是从效率和结果上对比政府和个人贡献（引出选择标准做出选择观点），政府的宣传能力和强制能力可以解决较多问题（观点主旨从这两个方面展开）。

First of all, the biggest threat of environmental damage is human activity and authority needs to use publicity to propagate and emphasize the importance of environment protection to form a result that all the residents would follow the notion of protections and take actions against the already-done damages. Government needs to educate its citizens’ awareness of environment protection and make every effort into keeping the surrounding clean. The widely known individual action of going green is to recycle and this social concept is a positive operation done by administration and its mass media.

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