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雅思小作文柱状图范文和写法介绍

2018-05-23

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今天,老师为烤鸭们带来雅思小作文柱状图范文和写法介绍,希望对大家的雅思小作文柱状图有所启发。下面我们一起来看看吧。

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今天,老师为烤鸭们带来柱状图范文和写法介绍,希望可以帮助广大烤鸭轻松备考雅思。

Describing an IELTS table is similar to describing charts or graphs. The same structures of comparison and contrast are used or language of change if the table is over time.

A table is just another way to present information.

It does not require that you learn a new type of language or a new way to organize things.

For example, take a look at this IELTS table showing the quality of life in five countries presented in a table (五国生活质量对比):  

Country GNP per head(1982:US dollars) Daily calorie supply per head Life expectancy at birth(years) Infant mortality(per 1000 live births)
Bangladesh 140 1877 40 132
Bolivia 570 2068 50 124
Egypt 690 2950 56 97
Indonesia 580 2296 40 87
USA 13160 3653 74 12

上面图表的信息也可以用下面这个柱状图展示出来:

However, as you'll notice, it is better presented as a table because of the huge difference between the USA and the others - this is not very clear on a bar chart as the numbers for two of the categories are too small to be visible, so a table looks better, but they would both be described in exactly the same way.

 如何分析雅思小作文图表? 

As with all graphs and charts, when describing tables: 

1. Do not describe all the data presented - present the main points of each feature (you should make sure you mention each feature) 

2.  Look for significant data; e.g. the highest, the lowest etc. 

3. Try and group the data. This may require you to use some general knowledge about the world, such as recognising developed and developing countries   

练习: 

Look at the IELTS table and answer the questions that follow:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words. 

Table: The Quality of Life in Five Countries 

Country GNP per head(1982:US dollars) Daily calorie supply per head Life expectancy at birth(years) Infant mortality(per 1000 live births)
Bangladesh 140 1877 40 132
Bolivia 570 2068 50 124
Egypt 690 2950 56 97
Indonesia 580 2296 40 87
USA 13160 3653 74 12

动笔写之前,你需要考虑这些点:

•What is the table measuring? 

•What type of language do you need to use (Change? Comparing and contrasting?) 

•What tense would you use? 

•Which country has the best quality of life and which has the worst?

•What information could you use for an overview / conclusion?

•How could you group the information?

•How many paragraphs would you have and what you would write about in each one?  >>>点击咨询雅思小作文注意事项

整体分析

Topic:standard of living, 5 countries

Language:comparison

Time/tense:1982 = past

Overview:USA far higher

Groups:USA = highest 

             Egypt, Indo, Bol = similar

             Bangladesh = very low


 Now, take a look at this IELTS table model answer and notice how the organization matches the plan. The groups chosen that are similar are grouped together into paragraphs. 

The language is focused on the language of comparison and contrast as the table is not over time. The compare and contrast structures have been highlighted so you can see how they are used. 

Country GNP per head(1982:US dollars) Daily calorie supply per head Life expectancy at birth(years) Infant mortality(per 1000 live births)
Bangladesh 140 1877 40 132
Bolivia 570 2068 50 124
Egypt 690 2950 56 97
Indonesia 580 2296 40 87
USA 13160 3653 74 12

 参考范文 

The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.  Overall, it can be seen that the quality of life in the USA was much higher than the other four countries. 

The USA had the highest GNP at 13,160 dollars per head.  It also had a far higher daily calorie intake and life expectancy, and conversely the lowest rate of infant mortality. 

The other developing countries had quality of life ratings that were significantly lower.  Broadly speaking, the range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were similar, with Egypt having the highest quality of life amongst the three.  However, the infant mortality rate in Egypt was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000 compared to 78 in Indonesia. 

Bangladesh had by far the lowest quality of life in all aspects.  Its GNP was one hundred times smaller than the USA’s.  Its calorie intake and life expectancy were about half those of the USA, and had an infant mortality rate that was 11 times higher.

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