雅思大作文的语言描写是大家突破雅思的重点难点。什么样的文字是雅思考官青睐的，什么样的句型是考官常用的。大家一定要把握，模仿，努力地写出考官的韵味。剑桥系列后面的黑框部分就有雅思的考官的作文，默认为雅思最高水准，这是最好的学习素材，就像学书法必须先临摹。今天一起分析一下雅思最高水平的文字的特点。大家要积极模仿。所采取的资料全部是来自剑桥9-11的范文。
1 平行结构多
Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.
这句话考官用两个动词调节语气，词汇准确，而且修辞上头韵的效果，大家多收集意思相近的动词，动词的排列是很体现语言水平的。
Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure tim
形容词+名词的排列，意思上表达全面，语感上佳。
The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests
名词的排列特别注意下意思的递进。逻辑全面性的体现。
2 围绕中心词写出长修饰
In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as smoking, drinking or even
eating junk food?
大家一定要培养宾语的扩展能力，写出中心名词后，用定语从句进行修饰。这是英汉之间语言的大区别。英语是先给中心词，后面加上修饰。中文习惯定语放在名词的前面
文中中心词是activity，后面是拓展部分。
3 谓语动词多样化处理
Rather than banning these sports， governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.
多个谓语动词处理有两种方式，一个是连接词衔接，动词原形排列，一个非谓语表达（to do/doing/done）体现多样性。但是，大家一定要注意非谓语的排列顺序会有逻辑
效果，所以要格外严谨。
we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.
非谓语表达强调结果的逻辑。
4 插入语多见
If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if
necessary, obtain the legally required license
插入语是有难度的手艺，需要有积累，位置摆的要有讲究。既要考虑语法，又要兼顾意思。需要长期练习。
5 状语处理
介词是英语的灵魂，介词引导状语是考官的惯用手段。介词的搭配和位置是英语写作的重点难点，一个人对于介词的驾驭直接体现语言水平。状语可以丰富句意，意思上更
全面。这是语言严谨性，逻辑性的直接体现。主要是时间，地点，方式，条件，目的等等。
One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.（伴随状语）
If there were easy-to-reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.（地点状语）
This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.（at时间状语细节展示）
As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.（as引导原因状语）
5概念到具体的过程
The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.
细节化的展示是雅思作文的特点。从抽象到具体，从概括到细节。大家要学会这种演绎法的思路。
Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.
6 不写简单句
考官的范文中，简单句出现的次数屈指可数，非常罕见。几乎一篇只有一两句。
Interest in sports is not universal and additional facilities my simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them.
这句话，本来是两个简单句，但是考官用连词搭配，变成复合句。所以，当大家简单句太多时，一定注意下连接词把这些简单句整合起来。但是，一定要注意逻辑关系，表达严谨性。
这6大特点，需要大家好好练习。从记忆背诵，到练习运用。从写句子开始，到段落，再到整篇。我们有最专业的词汇预料储备和最科学的训练方法。想冲高分的同学们，赶紧联系新仔和新通语言部落格报课吧。老师们会手把手带你写出完美句子，体验英语学术写作的逻辑，语法，词汇，雅思写作不再难，而且对大家之后的留学生涯会帮助很大。
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