

今天新通教育为大家分享关于句子结构错误的一个总结。如果很清晰,就转给你们的朋友,应该可以拯救不少5.5分的小伙伴。假设写一个简单的独立的句子 people play sport。 然后下面的句子结构都是错的。这些句子一出现,你的分数很有可能就是5.5分,一定要警惕起来啊~
1、独立的句子不能充当主语
例:people play sport is healthy.
修改:people can stay healthy, if they play sport.
2、独立的句子不能放在介词后面
例:the proportion of people play sport increased.
修改:the proportion of people who play sport increased.
3、独立的句子不能放在there be后面
例: there are many people play sport in this city.
修改:there are many people who play sport in this city.
4、独立的句子不能和另外一个独立的句子用副词相连
例:People play sport, thus, they can stay healthy.
修改1(逗号改成;或者.):People play sport; thus, they can stay healthy.
修改2(副词改成连词):People play sport, so they can stay healthy.
5、独立的句子不能和一个从属连词(although, while, when等)单独成句
例:People can stay healthy. Because people play sport.
修改:People can stay healthy, because people play sport.
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