雅思写作怎么样才能拿高分？干货来袭带你解读雅思写作！
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教育类话题每年都是雅思写作最多的，那么下文就总结了教育类话题的常用思路，当碰到教育类话题的时候，我们可以从道德，智力，身体素质，心理素质，工作和职业生涯角度来想观点。
雅思写作怎么样才能拿高分？干货来袭带你解读雅思写作！
论雅思写作中教育类话题思路的总结 教育类话题每年都是雅思写作最多的，那么下文就总结了教育类话题的常用思路，当碰到教育类话题的时候，我们可以从道德，智力，身体素质，心理素质，工作和职业生涯角度来想观点。 一．道德 符合社会道德标准 Adhere to code of conduct 提高道德标准 Improve moral standard 二．智力 学习理论知识 Theoretical knowledge 独立思考与辩证思考 Independent and critical thinking 分析和解决问题的能力 Analyzing skills and problem-solving ability 人际交流技巧和社交技能 Communication and social skills 适应社会 Adapt to new environment 学习能力 Intellectual ability 三．身体素质 提高身体素质 Develop physical fitness 养成良好的生活习惯 Maintain a healthy lifestyle 四．心理素质 心里健康 Psychological soundness (well-being) 文化修养 Self-cultivation An appreciation of art and literature 五．工作，职业生涯 实用技能 Practical skills 就业技能 Employable skills 合格雇员 Qualified employees
Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接)是雅思写作的一项评分标准，也是一项学术英语写作技能。想要让文章的 Coherence and Cohesion 更加学术并满足评分要求，有四种方法。
1.use transition signal to link ideas（使用过渡词语）
2.repeat key nouns（重复关键名词）
3.use consistent pronouns（使用一致性指代）
4.arrange your idea in logical order
这四种方法都可以让你的文章更加有逻辑和说服力，本文主要讨论第一种方法，也就是过渡词语的使用。过渡词语可以简单的概括为：起承转合因果例
起：for a start, to begin with, first and foremost, first, the first reason is that
承： inaddition,additionally,besides,whatismore,inadditionto...,Furthermore,moreover, anotherreasonisthat
转： however,but,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,nevertheless,nonetheless,albeit, although.
合：in conclusion, to sum up, last but not least
因：because, due to, because of, as a result of, result from
果：therefore, thus, hence, so, result in, lead to
例：for example, for instance
文章如果没有或缺乏这些过渡词语，那么读起来就会有点断层的感觉，比如下文：
Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. Gold has a lustrous beauty that,is resistant to corrosion. It is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purpose. Gold never needs,to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. A Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today,as the day it was mined twenty-three centuries ago. Gold is useful to industry and science. Gold,has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection outside the spaceship. Gold is,treasured for its beauty, its utility.
如果添加这些词语，那么文章整体读起来就会不一样，我们来一起看一下。
Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purpose. Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was mined twenty-three centuries ago. Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection outside the spaceship. In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty, but also for its utility.
很多学生在写文章的时候，往往会忘记使用这些过渡词语，认为没有必要，其实它的用处很大，通过以上两篇文章的对比，相信肯定会有不一样的感触。
论雅思写作中指代和重复关键名词的衔接使用
Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接)是雅思写作的一项评分标准，也是一项学术英语写作技能。想要让文章的 Coherence and Cohesion 更加学术并满足评分要求，有四种方法。
1.use transition signal to link ideas（使用过渡词语）
2.repeat key nouns（重复关键名词）
3.use consistent pronouns（使用一致性指代）
4.arrange your idea in logical order（以逻辑顺序安排你的观点）
这四种方法都可以让你的文章更加有逻辑和说服力，上篇文章讨论了过渡词语的使用，本文将继续讨论重复关键名词和使用一致性指代。
一．重复关键名词：
如果我们在读句子的时候，发现后一句子有一个词汇和前一句相同或相似，我们会自然而然的认为两句之间是有关系的，所以我们在写作的时候，可以使用重复关键名词这种方法，来加深两句之间的连贯。
1. One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting. (C10T1)
当我们读到“this skill”的时候，我们自然而然可以想到和上句的的“the ability to tell right from wrong”之间是有关系的，这样就会让两句之间的联系更加紧密。
2.To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.
这句话中的“a very young child”和“an infant”之间是同义词语，所以我们在读的时候，
会自然而然认为前句和后句之间的联系很紧密。
3. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discourage d from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents
这句话中划线的部分，我们使用的就是重复关键名词，这样读起来就会觉得前后两句是相关的。
二．代词指代：
有时候，我们用太多的重复关键名词会使得我们语言过于重复，所以我们除了使用关键名词之外，还可以使用代词的指代关系。
1. The main benefit of modern technology is that people's lives are much more convenient. This is because we are able to do many things without having to stay at the office or home, something which is extremely important given the busy lifestyles of today
这句话中的“this”指代前面的“people’s lives are much more convenient””，这两句之间有关系
2. As a result, people are able to do their work, liaise with colleagues or friends, and check their emails anywhere they choose such as in coffee shops or while travelling on a train or bus.
their”就是指代，代替的是“people”，
这样我们也会觉得前后逻辑性较强。
总之，为了使得我们的文章，连贯和逻辑性更强，我们需要在文章中多使用重复关键名词以及代词的指代
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