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1.政府很必要加强管制一些鼓励消费者买自己不需要的东西的广告。

错误Government has necessities to censor some advertisements which encourage people to buy more than they need.

错误点1: government前The，或者改成Governments

错误点2:Government has necessities to…非常中式的表达，一点也不常见；可以说就是错误的表达改成固定句型，地道表达It is necessary for the government to …

正确It is necessary for the government to censor some advertisements which encourage people to buy more than they need.

知识点1:censor的解析

(censoring, censored, censors)

V-T If someone in authority censors letters or the media, they officially examine them and cut out any information that is regarded as secret. 审查 (信件或媒体)

The military-backed government has heavily censored the news.

以军方为后盾的政府对新闻报道进行了严格审查。

V-T If someone in authority censors a book, play, or film, they officially examine it and cut out any parts that are considered to be immoral or inappropriate. 审查 (书刊、剧本、电影)

The Late Show censored the band's live version of "Bullet in the Head."

《深夜秀》节目组审查了该乐队现场演奏的曲目《脑里的子弹》。

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2.当局应该控制这些夸张报道社会问题的新闻。

错误：Authorities should censor those news which reporting on social questions exaggeratedly .

错误点1: 把reporting 改成report 

错误点2:把question s改成problems 

正确

Authorities should censor those news reports which give an exaggerated account of some social problems.

句子结构:主语(Authorities)+谓语(censor)+宾语(news reports) Which 引导定语从句，先行词是 news reports知识点

1:question： 通常指用口头或书面提出来要求回答或有待讨论解决的问题。 

problem： 指客观上存在的、难以处理或难以理解的问题。

problem指说话者认为难以解决的问题，它与动词 solve或settle（解决）搭配。而 question指说话者需要寻找答案的问题，它常与动词ask或answer连用。

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