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托福综合写作为什么一直拿不到满分?

2019-09-29

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托福综合写作部分是托福考试当中成绩比较难拿的部分,相当一部分同学在这部分的问题就是,不重视综合写作,这是写作部分拿不到好成绩的原因之一。

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在托福考试中,综合写作跟独立写作也是我们非常重要的一个部分。很多同学把写作的重点都放在独立写作上,其实这两个部分占分比例是一样的,不存在大小作文之分,所以要同等重视。

有些学生说老师,我在练习托福听力的时候就是在练习综合写作,这种观点只能说有一半是对的,为什么哪? 因为我们知道综合写作虽然是个写作部分,但是要拿到高分主要是看听力部分。考生会被要求先看一篇3分钟的学术文章,但是这篇文章的结构一般比较清晰,而且在最后写的时候又出现在页面上,所以对于大多数的托福考生来说,阅读部分并不是很难,会丢分的一个部分,那么重点就在听力部分了。如果听力听不懂,那我们就很难写,所以大家练习托福听力的过程却是有助于我们综合写作的提高。可是,托福听力只需要听出来main idea就可以做出来选择题,但是我们的综合写作需要我们听懂所有的大意和细节,并且要写出来,所以这也是两个不一样的地方。

所以我们说综合写作要写的好,不能只是听懂大意,而且所有的细节也需要写上去。下面这篇是学生写的综合写作TPO20 的内容,大家可以通过对于原文听力感受到我们缺失了很多细节,这也是我们拿不到高分的原因。

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学生作文:

First, even though the reading suggests that trees and vegetation may be destroyed by the forest fire, the professor argues in the lecture that it isn’t worried. This is because the fire is beneficial to make the forest more diverse than before. Old trees have been destroyed while it’s beneficial for small plants to grow. Obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Moreover, despite the statement in the reading that it also influences wildlife, the professor contends that the theory is the same as the plants’. Then she support the idea with the fact that the fire can promote the number of the opportunities for smaller animals like rabbits.

Finally, the professor asserts that the fire won’t decrease tourists’ passion. Whereas the author of the reading claims that it shows a bad effect on tourism. The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that this kind of massive fire can’t happen every year. So it won’t affects next year’s tourism.

TPO 20 听力原文:

Actually fires are natural part of ecological cycle and their role is not just destructive but also creative. That is why the “let it burn” policy is fundamentally a good one, even if it sometimes causes fires of the 1988 Yellowstone fire. Let’s look at what happened after 1988 Yellowstone fire.

First, vegetation. As you might imagine, scorched areas were in time colonized by new plants. As a matter of fact, the plants in Yellowstone became more diverse because the fire created an opportunity for certain plants that could not grow otherwise. For example, areas where the trees have been destroyed by fire could now be taken over by smaller plants that needed open and shaded space to grow. And another example, seeds of certain plants species won’t germinate unless they’re exposed to very high levels of heat. So, those plants started appearing after the fire as well.

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It’s a similar story with the animals. Not only did their population recover, but the fire also created new opportunities. For instance, the small plants that replaced trees after the fire created an ideal habitat for certain small animals like rabbits and hares. And when rabbits and hares started thriving, so did some predators that depended on them for food. So, certain food chains actually became stronger after the fire than they were before.

And last, fires like 1988 Yellowstone fire would be a problem for tourism if they happened every year. But they don’t. it was a very unusual combination of factors that year, low rainfall, unusually strong winds, accumulation of dry undergrowth that caused fire to be so massive. This combination has not occurred since and Yellowstone has not seen such a fire since 1988. Visitors came back to the park next year and each year after that.

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