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雅思写作,如何在观点思路不变的情况下提高语言表达?

2019-12-02

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雅思写作,如何在观点思路不变的情况下提高语言表达?

雅思写作出国留学考试雅思

  以下题为例:

  An increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

  一、支持观点

  1.学习异国文化,促进交流

  “屌丝”版本:We can learn more foreign culture and communicate/talk with others.

  “高富帅”的版本:Learning more foreign culture and communicating with others is a factor that can never be easily ignored.

  诀窍:在原句中提炼关键词:learn foreign culture/ communicate,变成动名词,做新句子的主语。

  2.锻炼心智,促进成长,培养独立能力

  “屌丝”版本:You can grow mentally and make progress. You can take care of yourself.

  “高富帅”的版本:That you can take care of yourself deserves/warrants our attention.

  诀窍:原句前加that,瞬间变主语从句,一秒钟拉长句子。

  3.开拓眼界

  “屌丝”版本:We can open our eyes. / We can broaden our horizon.

  “高富帅”的版本:Our horizon can be broadened. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

  诀窍:主动变被动,客观正式。

  4.提升求职竞争力

  “屌丝”版本:We can improve career competitiveness/in the job market.

  “高富帅”的版本:Improvement of/in career competitiveness is the factor that can never be easily ignored.

  诀窍:提取关键词improve,变成抽象名词。

  5.文凭含金量更高

  “屌丝”版本:A foreign diploma is with higher value/The diploma will be more widely recognized.

  “高富帅”的版本:Wider recognition is the most frequently quoted reason when asked about why they study abroad.

  诀窍:提取关键词more widely recognized,变名词词性。

  6.环境优美

  “屌丝”版本:The environment will be more beautiful. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

  “高富帅”的版本:More beautiful environment is among the many advantages of study abroad.

  诀窍:提取关键词environment, beautiful。

  7.完善的社会福利

  “屌丝”版本:They have complete social welfare system/social safety net.

  “高富帅”的版本:Complete social welfare system can be overseen under no condition.

  诀窍:提取关键词complete social welfare system。

  二、反对观点

  1.孤独,寂寞

  “屌丝”版本:We will feel lonelier.

  “高富帅”的版本:Loneliness is what plagues the overseas students. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

  诀窍:提取关键词lonely,变名词,并用plague引出缺点。

  2.种族歧视

  “屌丝”版本:The local people will laugh at us. /racial discrimination

  “高富帅”的版本:Racial discrimination makes the life of them difficult.

  诀窍:提取关键词racial discrimination。

  3.水土不服

  “屌丝”版本:We cannot adapt ourselves easily to the new environment physically.

  “高富帅”的版本:Inhabitability/Being unable to adapt to the new environment makes them suffer.

  诀窍:提取关键词cannot adapt,两种方式变名词。 >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

  4.思乡

  “屌丝”版本:We might miss our hometown.

  “高富帅”的版本:Homesick plagues those who study abroad.

  诀窍:抽象出关键性名词homesick。

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