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2019-12-09

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本期为同学们分享的是托福写作范文。

托福写作范文是我们学习托福写作的一个重要方法,希望本期新通教育西安托福老师为同学们带来的托福写作赏析能够起到帮助作用。

Parents give their children weekly money to buy whatever they want. Some people think this can cause bad habits and ideas about money in children.

In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分论点1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore, they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example, I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.

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In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分论点2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.

In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.

1:范文的中心论点是?

中心论点: I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

2:范文的分论点是?

分论点1:Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives.

分论点2:In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.

3:作者在文章中用到了哪些论证方法?

In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分论点1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore(因果论证), they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example(举例论证), I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.

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In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分论点2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more*举例论证, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since(因果论证) they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.

In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.

4:作者是如何展开自己的观点的?是如何说清楚自己的思路的?

如何展开一个观点,关键在于是否能够灵活运用论证方式。主体段基本遵循总分结构,即写一个主旨句,再围绕主旨句用各种论证方法进行充分的拓展和论证。我们常用的论证方法有:举例论证,对比论证,原因论证,结果论证,解释说明,,假设论证。

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