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如何让我们在雅思写作作文中有话说?

2020-03-13

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本期新通教育西安雅思老师为同学们分享,如何让我们在雅思写作作文当中有话说,希望能给同学们带来帮助。

在我们的写作中,经常碰到拿到一个题目感觉没有多少可以去写,或者说展开的时候比较难。我们今天来通过分析一篇文章来看一下怎么让作文可写的内容变多。我们就用顾家北雅思写作书上的这篇文章来分析。

题目: A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? guP98

Imposing sentences is widely accepted as a method to punish those who commit serious offence and sometimes as a correctional method. This approach may be effective, but we should also consider other ways to reform offenders.

The prison sentence may have a deterrent effect on either prospective offenders or habitual offenders. Imprisonment means that those who violate laws will lose freedom, a consequence that no rational person is willing to take. The criminal record can have a lasting impact on their lives including their career. They will not commit crimes when they run out of money; instead, they will choose to find work or run a small business to earn a living. This can help create a peaceful and safe community.

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While I agree with a long prison term may sometimes help us fight crime, we can consider community service as an alternative. These services can make some offenders, especially those who committed minor crimes, law-abiding citizens, who can learn responsibility and realize the damage caused by crimes to innocent people. If they are sentenced to prison, they will possibly make friends with other offenders. They will not repent or take stock of their lives, so they may reoffend after being released, which can pose a threat to other members of society.

We can also provide educational opportunities and vocational training for them, improving their interpersonal skills and job skills. It is worth nothing that many juvenile offenders or first-time offenders broke the law because of a lack of social experience or low social-economic status. Crime is no longer an option, if they can find work and understand legal responsibilities. The prison can isolate criminals from society, shattering their confidence in finding work and reintegrating into society.

Overall, I agree that the harsh penalty can deter crime, but it is not the best approach. Through other rehabilitation programmes, we can build a happy and stable society.

文中重点词汇解释:

Impose sentences:判刑

commit serious offence:犯重罪

reform offenders:改造罪犯

prospective offenders:潜在罪犯

Imprisonment:关押,坐牢

The criminal record:犯罪记录

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Alternative:可供选择的事物

Repent:后悔

take stock of:加以总结,进行反思

juvenile offenders:少年犯

shatter their confidence: 破坏他们的自信心

reintegrating into society:重新融入社会

harsh penalty:重罚

rehabilitation:康复

文章题目是对longer prison term 和other methods 进行比较。文中开头指出这个方法好,但其它方法也要考虑。

第2段先指出了这种方法的好处。第3段中指出了这种做法的一些缺陷,而在第4段中指出了其它可以考虑的一些方法,比如进行教育和职业培训。最后一段进行了总结,指出了这种方法并不是唯一的,最好的,其它方法也要考虑,这样才能建立更好的社会。

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