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2020-03-19

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导语:

来自英国的Simon是雅思考试的前考官。他创办的ielts-simon.com网站有许多雅思备考不可多得宝贵资料。每天他都会在网站上更新一个简短的小课程,我们将其搬运过来并翻译成中文,供大家学习参考。

来自英国的Simon是雅思考试的前考官。他创办的ielts-simon网站有许多雅思备考不可多得宝贵资料。每天他都会在网站上更新一个简短的小课程,我们将其搬运过来并翻译成中文,供大家学习参考。

本系列干货的所有文章都来自ielts-simon.

IELTS Writing Task 2: from plan to paragraph

雅思写作 Part 2:从构思到段落

When you have written a plan, you then need to turn your notes into full sentences. Let's try this using the paragraph plan below.

当你构思完毕后,你需要把你的笔记变成完整的句子。让我们尝试使用下面的段落构思。

Paragraph plan:

段落构思:

- High street shops are disappearing because of online stores.

由于网店的出现,商业街的实体商店正在消失。

- Online shopping is faster, cheaper and more convenient.

网上购物更快捷,更便宜,更方便。

- People can sit at home, search for deals, receive delivery the next day.

人们可以坐在家里搜索订单,第二天就可以收到快递。

- It is impossible for normal stores to compete with the range of choice.

一般商店不可能在选择范围上与网店竞争。

- Personal example: recent purchases on Amazon.

个人例子:最近在亚马逊上购买的商品。

Full paragraph:

完整段落:

In my opinion, high street shops are disappearing due to competition from online shopping websites, which are cheaper and more convenient. Web-based stores allow customers to search for the best deals, make purchases from the comfort of their homes, and receive delivery of their purchased items the next day. Furthermore, it is impossible for traditional bricks-and-mortar stores to compete with the range of choice that can be found online. For example, I recently used the website Amazon to buy some fairly rare academic textbooks that were not stocked at my local bookshop. As a customer, the fact that I can find any product imaginable online makes it almost pointless for me to make a trip to my local high street.

在我看来,网上购物更便宜,更方便,所以这使得实体商店正在消失。网络的商店允许客户搜索最优订单,在舒适的家中购物,并在第二天收到他们购买的物品。此外,传统的实体店不可能与网店在选择范围上进行竞争。例如,我最近使用亚马逊网站购买了一些在我当地的书店里买不到的相当罕见的学术课本。作为一名顾客,我可以在网上找到任何我想买的产品,这让我去当地的商业街购物变得几乎毫无意义。

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