10月30日雅思笔试写作真题全解析 | 附高分范文

 2021年10月30日

granted that 即使

constant pressure 持续的压力

intense pressure 强大的压力

multiple 许多的

excel 超越

stiff competition 激烈的竞争

academic performance 成绩

prestigious university 有名的学校

a special privilege 一个特权

live up to 不辜负

adverse consequence 不良后果

impose too much pressure 施加太大压力

exert a life-long impact 产生终身的影响

a distorted recognition 一个扭曲的认识

gain an edge in the job market 在就业市场上获得优势

educational assessment 教育评估

disastrous 灾难般的

constant goal-setting 不断设定目标

digest 消化

unhealthy defiance 不健康的反抗

self-doubt 自我怀疑

unsatisfied adulthood 失望的成年

sleep deprivation 失眠

eating disorders 饮食失调

excess stress 过量的压力

parental pressure 父母的压力

bring forth a nervous breakdown 产生精神崩溃

a bare necessity 必然

there is a fine line between... and... 仅一线之隔

Granted that parents do expect their children to lead a successful life, they put them under constant pressure to perform. Generally, I believe that being under such intense pressure can have serious consequences in multiple areas for children. 

Many children are taught to compete with each other from their earliest memory so as to survive and to excel. It is true that stiff competition begins from primary school where students have to begin to remain good academic performance in order to enter a prestigious university later on. Protecting children from heart-breaking rejections is a parents’ special privilege believed by many. However, sometimes they hold the expectations too high for children to live up to. 

One major adverse consequence for imposing too much pressure on children is that they may easily form a negative attitude to learning, which will exert a life-long impact. Many parents have a distorted recognition that the purpose of receiving education is simply to guarantee a future career, and therefore gaining an edge in the job market is the only goal that motivates children to work hard. In this case, examinations are widely used as the sole educational assessment to evaluate the learning process, and children focus only on what is likely to be tested; thus, the educational experience is narrowed to a large extent, which can easily discourage the interests in learning. 

Another disastrous influence is that children who are under high amount of stress are at a greater risk of developing depression or other mental or physical health conditions. When children are dealing with the constant goal-setting by parents, they are digesting high levels of anxiety. Fear of failure can stop them from taking up new tasks or even completing the ones at hand. It can create unhealthy defiance that  leads to self-doubt or even unsatisfied adulthood. Issues, such as, sleep deprivation, eating disorders, and loss of interest in hobbies are all among the consequences for excess stress. Hence, parental pressure may bring forth a nervous breakdown.

To conclude, although a secure family environment is considered a bare necessity for healthy growth and development of children, there is a fine line between caring and caring too much.

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