托福独立写作高分之时间策略（三）

前面讲到，当考生把框架结构和论证段细节和例子补充完毕，这个时候时间要剩下大概5-8分钟，需要快速转入开头和结尾的完善。此讲笔者要跟大家分享几种开头段落的写法，帮助大家在考试的时候能够从容。
    我们还是延续之前的那道题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students should be given one long vacation each year instead of several short vacation periods.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

策略一：[Beginning with the other argument]
    从对论入手，可以先承认对论的一些优点，然后转折到自己的论点。
Short, frequent vacation periods can appeal to some people. They like the fact that they won’t have to study too long without getting a break. In addition, they may find that a small amount of vacation at any one time is enough for them to rest or do other things besides study. However, I personally agree with the idea of granting one long vacation per year rather than allowing several shorter vacation periods.

策略二：为自己的论点营造一个有说服力的背景去支撑自己的观点
[Creating a persuasive context in support of our argument]
When students consider an upcoming vacation and break from their studies, they may be thinking about a variety of things. Perhaps they are looking forward to a chance to rest and unwind from the stresses of study. In other cases, they may be relishing the opportunity to make some money or get some real-world experience – whether that be work or travel (or both). Personally, I agree with the idea of granting one long vacation per year rather than allowing several shorter vacation periods.

策略三：把读者置身于你想象的画面里
[Put the reader into the picture]

Imagine you are a college student. You have been studying hard and a vacation period is finally coming up. However, the vacation is only going to last for a week. Does it truly feel like enough time for a real break? From my own perspective, it doesn’t. Personally, I agree with the idea of granting one long vacation per year rather than allowing several shorter vacation periods.

策略四：加转折，变客观
[+ Insert concession statements/clauses]

Imagine you are a college student. You have been studying hard and a vacation period is finally coming up. However, the vacation is only going to last for a week. Does it truly feel like enough time for a real break? Well, it may feel sufficient for some or even many students, but from my own perspective, it doesn’t. Personally, I agree with the idea of granting one long vacation per year rather than allowing several shorter vacation periods.

基本的四种写作的开头方式，考生都需要烂熟于心，在紧张的写作过程中，当转入开头段的补充时，就应该十分清楚自己需要选择哪一种开头，为后面还要写的结尾段争取时间。具体结尾段落怎样完美收场，我将会在下文中继续与大家分享。敬请关注。
 

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